Second Peer Blog Response

Your notes are very good. They are very detailed and they tell readers exactly what is in the articles. Your responses are good too. I didn't see anything that needed to be improved. I can tell that you are learning quite a bit about your topic, and your question in your last post proves that you want to explore it more. Maybe a little more background information could be added, but besides that it is fine. Everything is easy to read and the coloring is okay. There are only two out of four citations completed. One way to improve this blog is to add the other two citations. All the titles of the posts are correct. There is one post missing, and that post is the last one that we were assigned.